Category Archives: Writing Advice

Cool Tools for Self-Editing


I spend a lot of time tweaking words in my stories – perhaps because in my heart I am a poet.  I probably need to spend more time tweaking plot and character development!  Be that as it may, here are three  fun tools I like to use:

Word Frequency Tool

This tool will give you either a cloud of your most used words or a graph.  Then you can visually see if you’ve overused any one particular strong word (especially problematical in very short stories) or if you have too many prepositions or passive language.  I like to see many 1-count words, and I find it helpful to skim down and see my words as a list by frequency, rather than in sentences. (Free)

Wordle

This tool is similar – paste in your text and you get a cloud of your words – but this generates ART.  Yes, a pretty poster image of your story’s words – hit randomize a few times to see the various styles.  I thought one story I pasted in generated a fabulous image of the story’s themes and feel.

You can even link to your website (or a single post) and perhaps get a sense of your personal theme, or the tone of your site. (Free)

Thinkmap Visual Thesaurus

I love this interactive thesaurus.  You get a branching map of related words that you can expand by following the branches.  You can also check the specific definition of each related word. (Free trial, then $20 per year)

Kurt Vonnegut’s Rules for Writing Short Stories

Kurt Vonnegut speaking at Case Western Reserve...

Image via Wikipedia

In his book Bagombo Snuff Box: Uncollected Short Fiction, Vonnegut listed eight rules for writing a short story:

  1. Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
  2. Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
  3. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
  4. Every sentence must do one of two things—reveal character or advance the action.
  5. Start as close to the end as possible.
  6. Be a Sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them—in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
  7. Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.
  8. Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To hell with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.

Vonnegut qualifies the list by adding that Flannery O’Connor broke all these rules except the first, and that great writers tend to do that.